There you are, here I am
Here I am, there you are
We have waited all day
For this moment to arrive
It seems we were worlds apart
Until time passed
And the day drew to a close
We have waited all day
For this moment to arrive
It seems we were worlds apart
Until time passed
And the day drew to a close
Once again we meet
It is a joyous occasion to be here
In your presence once again
I enjoy the rhythm of this meeting
It's slow and easy. Yes, slow and easy
You know sometimes it gets rough
I am happy that it is clear
To see your splendor
To see your beauty
And I cherish the warmth
You give to me once again
Tenderly touching me
We must enjoy what time is left
Soak it all in, hoping it will last
But alas, this will come to an end
Until we meet again
Until we meet again
For I am the sunset
14 comments:
love this! wow! just in case you have not been, here's my week 38 haha! http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/09/30/i-cant-hold-it/
wow....till we meet again..this reminds me of a song written in the early 1900's called Till we meet again...
Wonderful poem!Just loved the poetic feelings bursted out with rhythmic words.thnx for sharing...check on mine too plz if you have time and rate them.thnx
beautiful and creative words.
sweet sentiments.
Happy Rally.
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Thank you all for your kind words
There you are, here I am
Here I am, there you are
I have waited countless days
For such a poem to arrive
Congratulations! This is a gem!
sweet! i love this one.. i can totally relate to your writing. nice to find you :)
Imagination and rrel...thank you too for your comments
You were right...I did like this one. I'm so happy you've found your new home :)
I love this piece! for i am the sunset and I am the sea! Great!
-Roxanne
@Darcel...told ya...and it's actually 3 homes now :-)
@Roxanne...thanks so much
Wow. This is perfect. Just perfect. Thank you.
@seasweetie...you're too kind...thank you.
@Promising Poets...it has been awhile since I have done any writing, but how can I turn down such a fine invite.
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