Life is full of this and full of that
We all know that's old hat
We laugh we cry we fuss we fight
In the end we do what is right
Another day has dawned upon us
Some are waking and starting to cuss
Some will work and some will play
This will happen throughout the day
Enjoy it all and have much fun
At the end of the day it will all be done
13 comments:
Very nice! I like this one a lot.
reggie! great to see you at one shot...i like this...you only get one today so make the most of it...
Reggie I like it - written like a lesson
and a lesson written like a poem
delightful
thanks for sharing with One Shot
~MDW
To capture the scope of life in the rising and the fading of a day...very nice. One day, one life, both pass all too quick - don't complain, just make the most of it. Come good or bad, it will end. That's the one concrete. Nice write!
So simple. Yet we usually make it so complicated. Thanks for the smile!
Reggie, I like this poem. It pieces together the many emotions and situations we go through in a day. I'm new to OSW and thought imwould stop by and say hello to a few people. Enjoyed your poem a lot because it made me smile.
~ Cheryl
I like it. It's fun.
Misstated what I meant, LOL. . .
Not a big fan of facile-rhyme poetry, but I otherwise like the life-smart message and language.
You should sell this to Hallmark, they make money for a reason.
I'd like to thank everyone for your kind comments. It was my first One Shot.
A special thanks to @Brian Miller for the invite.
Looking forward to many more One Shots.
@Steve Isaak I just may consider that.
Again, thanks everyone...you're all great.
cool entry.
A++
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Your poetry rocks!
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Hey Jingle, I missed this one, but should be ready for the next.
You're too kind.
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