I take one look and I know for sure
The time is right for this will cure
The ailing moment knocking at my door
My next move is I wonder to fix it
How will I dress it
This thing before me
Long wet and ready
It is hot and steamy
Too hot to handle with hands alone
How will I dress it
It is all before me
Ready and waiting
I spot it and reach
And make the application
I make my first move with closed eyes
My hands make the instinctive move
I open my mouth to receive this thing
And take the first bite
I say to myself
Yes oh yes
This will surely do
My hunger will be satisfied
With this hot dog from beginning to end
11 comments:
haha...was not sure where you were going...but you leave me hungry...nice one shot
Oh yes! And lunch time is still hours away :( Perhaps this says more about me than you...but my thoughts were headed a totally different direction in the beginning! Great write :)
Pass the mustard please.
LOL Clever. Made me think of...well, never mind. Very nice set up for the ending.
Nice extended metaphor. I especially appreciate the pun on "relish."
Thanks everybody for your kind words...I tried really hard to keep it a secret as long as possible :D
Wait.. let me ketchup
That's cute and funny too!
@booguloo...too funny.
Hi Reggie
interesting play on the sense... ;-)
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Creative, leaving smile on one's face! Loved the end!
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