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Tuesday, January 11, 2011

I Relish It

I take one look and I know for sure
The time is right for this will cure
The ailing moment knocking at my door

My next move is I wonder to fix it
How will I dress it 
This thing before me

Long wet and ready
It is hot and steamy
Too hot to handle with hands alone

How will I dress it
It is all before me
Ready and waiting

I spot it and reach
And make the application
I make my first move with closed eyes

My hands make the instinctive move
I open my mouth to receive this thing
And take the first bite

I say to myself
Yes oh yes
This will surely do

My hunger will be satisfied
With this hot dog from beginning to end
That is why I Relish It






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11 comments:

Brian Miller said...

haha...was not sure where you were going...but you leave me hungry...nice one shot

Tashtoo said...

Oh yes! And lunch time is still hours away :( Perhaps this says more about me than you...but my thoughts were headed a totally different direction in the beginning! Great write :)

the walking man said...

Pass the mustard please.

dustus said...

LOL Clever. Made me think of...well, never mind. Very nice set up for the ending.

Anonymous said...

Nice extended metaphor. I especially appreciate the pun on "relish."

Reggie said...

Thanks everybody for your kind words...I tried really hard to keep it a secret as long as possible :D

Anonymous said...

Wait.. let me ketchup

Anonymous said...

That's cute and funny too!

Reggie said...

@booguloo...too funny.

Shashidhar Sharma said...

Hi Reggie

interesting play on the sense... ;-)

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Anonymous said...

Creative, leaving smile on one's face! Loved the end!

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