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It was a moonlit night
Cool was the breeze
Which moves leaves
In trees
Two layers of clouds
In the sky above
The lowest
Moving fast swiftly
The sights and sounds
Of this night
Although I am here
Have taken me away
To my place of escape
From the mortar and brick
For a moment in mind
For a moment in time
These are a few of my favorite things
This is my entry for Poetry Potluck where the theme is
These are a few of my favorite things.
14 comments:
ha nature does transport :)
I enjoyed the picture as well as your work here :)
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/04/17/the-girl-in-the-corner-so-you-can-remember/
A nice escape.. hunh? But we all have a few of those in our minds, a stolen moment for ourselves in time.. :)
very well composed..
Sunday Hugs xx
Thanks lynnaima...some of the best "time travel".
Olivia, yes I think we need a few of those in our lives from time to time...thank you my dear.
Hugs to you too xoxo
Mental escape - couldn't be better. Excellent selection for Potluck, Reggie, and right on theme!
Poem on ...
Thank you Jamie...very kind of you.
A moment of peace, what a beautiful thing to wish for! Bravo!
we all needed that ...
elegant expressions.
A++
I can see why that moment would be a favorite thing :) Lovely.. and a simple yet elegant image too.
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I love a beautiful moon lit night also. If the clouds go away, tonight will be just that, a beautiful moon lit night.
can I take a mental escape up in the mountains?
Luna
your reminisce well expressed.. here's my potluck reggie..
http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/22/springtide/
Blaga, if you only knew how many times wishes like that arise :-)
Jingle, as I was saying to Blaga...I could use more of those :-) Thank you both for your support.
Vinay, I have been sitting in the back yard for a few minutes the past few nights and I close my eyes and go....thanks so much
Hi Gigi...I hope you did get the clear sky...the moon has been beautiful lately.
Luna, the good thing about closing your eyes?...you can escape to wherever your heart desires...the mountains do sound good...
fiveloaf, thank you
This is good. I really enjoyed it. Peace is a great gift.
Hi Connie, you're so kind to say and I'm glad you enjoyed it...yes, peaceful moments are truly a treasure.
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